in sharing.... washed on shore love glistened for a moment - hearts etched in sand The syllabic count on this Senryu 3/7/4 There is much debate on what is acceptable when writing Haiku and Senryu. Many believe the 5/7/5 form is the only proper presentation. This is not true. It is amazing that the smallest form of poetry carries with it the most controversy. One could write volumes on the subject. A great place to find Haiku with links to other great sites is a visit to www.haikuhut.com, very enlightening.